The Car Part II

There the story ended.

“Oh,that is so sad: said Alice.

Will you help me break the spell,asked Katherine. “Of course I will!”, replied Alice.

So from then on, Katherine and Alice were best friends. One day, while Alice and Katherine were talking, Katherine started to disappear.

“What is happening” asked Alice.

Oh No! I knew this was going to happen” said Katherine

You did!

Yes, I did. Now grab onto some part of me, said Katherine

Alice hurridly held onto Katherine’s mirro. She was just in time because Katherine vanished with a little POP! They reappeared in a little village.

“I know this place” said Katherine

How did you know you were going to disappear, asked Alice

It always happens after a few weeks, when I get attached to my owner, I disappear and then end up someplace else. I have never ended up here. It seems so familiar, said Katherine

Lets go into town to see if someone can tell us where we are, croaked Alice/

Okay, replied Katherine

So Alice hopped into the car and they zoomed towards the town. As they reached the town, they the saw all the townspeople crowded around the streets.

You have come back to your parents, katherine, said one of the townsfolk.

What is going on? How can my parents be here, asked Katherine

Dont you remember? You were under a spell. You were changed into a car, cried another person.

This is why everything is so familiar. said Katherine

Could take us to Katherine’s parents,asked Alice.

YES! We’ll take you to their hut. said the twonspeople.

Alice, Katherine and the townspeople all went to Katherine’s parent’s hut. When they all got to the hut, Katherine’s parents were so happy, they started crying. We must go and find the old witch. So she can change Katherine back into a human, said Katherine’s mom.

Katherine and Alice started to llook for the old witch. She lived by the creek. Her hut was small and shabby.Katherine started begging the old witch to change her back into a human. The old witch kept refusing,

The spell will only break when one says your my friend, said the  old witch.

Alice said, “You have been my friend since I learnt you could talk. Just as Alice said, sparks appeared around Katherine.She rose into the air and turned into a human,

Alice and Katherine raced back to the hut. Katherine was so glad that she was human again. She asked Alice if she would stay with her and her parents. They all lived together happily ever after.

  THE END

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700 odd words. I am so proud of her.

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15 Responses to The Car Part II

  1. Prashanti says:

    Great writing at this age !!!! Kudos, Ashwina :)

  2. Chumi says:

    wow… i’m proud of ur daughter too! :)

  3. suma says:

    ashwina, that was a lovely story! write more,

    lemme read this out to my 6 yrold…

  4. Amrita says:

    Ashwina, you have an amazing grasp of language and a fantastic imagination. May your gifts grow with the years to come and I look forward to reading your work as a published writer! :-D All the best!

    Amrita

  5. La Vida Loca says:

    So proud of u Ashwina! Cant wait to read the other story.

  6. Sonia says:

    Proud of you Ashu! Good work

    Mei mausi

  7. choxbox says:

    nice ashwina!
    it feel great when your kid produces stuff that don’t have anything to do with, right?!

  8. Rohini says:

    Hey. That’s a really cool story!

  9. Preethi says:

    awesome writing!!!

  10. choxbox says:

    *feels

  11. shilpadesh says:

    My my that was awesome! Your daughter has a gift Sunita!

  12. pujathakur says:

    What a gifted child you have, re!!
    God bless her!!

    Me:Thanks.. I know I am blessed to have such intelligent children

  13. Mom Gone Mad says:

    Girls got a gift. Good stuff, Ashwina!

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