There the story ended.
“Oh,that is so sad: said Alice.
Will you help me break the spell,asked Katherine. “Of course I will!”, replied Alice.
So from then on, Katherine and Alice were best friends. One day, while Alice and Katherine were talking, Katherine started to disappear.
“What is happening” asked Alice.
Oh No! I knew this was going to happen” said Katherine
You did!
Yes, I did. Now grab onto some part of me, said Katherine
Alice hurridly held onto Katherine’s mirro. She was just in time because Katherine vanished with a little POP! They reappeared in a little village.
“I know this place” said Katherine
How did you know you were going to disappear, asked Alice
It always happens after a few weeks, when I get attached to my owner, I disappear and then end up someplace else. I have never ended up here. It seems so familiar, said Katherine
Lets go into town to see if someone can tell us where we are, croaked Alice/
Okay, replied Katherine
So Alice hopped into the car and they zoomed towards the town. As they reached the town, they the saw all the townspeople crowded around the streets.
You have come back to your parents, katherine, said one of the townsfolk.
What is going on? How can my parents be here, asked Katherine
Dont you remember? You were under a spell. You were changed into a car, cried another person.
This is why everything is so familiar. said Katherine
Could take us to Katherine’s parents,asked Alice.
YES! We’ll take you to their hut. said the twonspeople.
Alice, Katherine and the townspeople all went to Katherine’s parent’s hut. When they all got to the hut, Katherine’s parents were so happy, they started crying. We must go and find the old witch. So she can change Katherine back into a human, said Katherine’s mom.
Katherine and Alice started to llook for the old witch. She lived by the creek. Her hut was small and shabby.Katherine started begging the old witch to change her back into a human. The old witch kept refusing,
The spell will only break when one says your my friend, said the old witch.
Alice said, “You have been my friend since I learnt you could talk. Just as Alice said, sparks appeared around Katherine.She rose into the air and turned into a human,
Alice and Katherine raced back to the hut. Katherine was so glad that she was human again. She asked Alice if she would stay with her and her parents. They all lived together happily ever after.
THE END
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700 odd words. I am so proud of her.



Great writing at this age !!!! Kudos, Ashwina
wow… i’m proud of ur daughter too!
ashwina, that was a lovely story! write more,
lemme read this out to my 6 yrold…
Ashwina, you have an amazing grasp of language and a fantastic imagination. May your gifts grow with the years to come and I look forward to reading your work as a published writer!
All the best!
Amrita
So proud of u Ashwina! Cant wait to read the other story.
Proud of you Ashu! Good work
Mei mausi
good job:-)
Awesome!
nice ashwina!
it feel great when your kid produces stuff that don’t have anything to do with, right?!
Hey. That’s a really cool story!
awesome writing!!!
*feels
My my that was awesome! Your daughter has a gift Sunita!
What a gifted child you have, re!!
God bless her!!
Me:Thanks.. I know I am blessed to have such intelligent children
Girls got a gift. Good stuff, Ashwina!